- many people are interested in learning to play guitar and might be familiar with some learning resources, such as taking lessons from a personal instructor. However, these people may not realize the disadvantages of starting out with personal instruction; lessons cost money and involve meeting with an instructor at a specific time that may not be convenient for the student. In addition to this, many people will find that they are somewhat uncomfortable learning a complex skill in front of someone else, and may struggle with meeting the expectations of a teacher. Therefore, the most ideal medium for learning the basic skills of guitar would provide users with clear, relevant information that they can enjoy at any time they wish in the comfort of their own homes.
- Many people are interested in learning to play an instrument, and guitar is one the the most popular forms of musical self-expression available. Due to the overwhelming amount of information available, however, a potential student might be interested in finding a personal instructor to guide them through this process. while a personal instructor might be very helpful in the learning process, many people do not realize the drawbacks of personal instruction. Lessons will cost money and involve arranging their learning schedule around a teacher’s availability; in addition to this, many people will feel uncomfortable trying to learn a difficult skill in front of someone else and trying to keep up with their instructor’s expectations of progress. Therefore, these potential guitar students would benefit from a personal resource that has all the benefits of personal instruction without the problems of cost and schedule flexibility as well as the added fear of social embarrassment. This self-teaching guide will provide users with detailed instruction that they can enjoy in the comfort of their own home, anytime, and without an unwanted audience.
Thursday, September 18, 2008
problem statements
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I think 1 is your best bet. I can relate to this one a lot more and I think most other people would agree. The first thought when you try to learn the guitar is getting a private instructor. To me this takes the fun out of it and you were able to capture this in the closing of your problem statement. You elude to the fact that you can do it at your leisure and this makes it more enjoyable.
I like 1) because I
I like 2) because it starts off with my ultimate goal and how I will probably go about achieving that, but then you come in and tell me how I really should go about it.
i thought #1 was the best because it was the most concise and straightforward. it showed you realize your audience has some knowledge about learning musical instruments, and it very quickly outlined your alternative suggestion for how someone could learn to play the guitar.
Problem Statement number 1 is the best one because it is more concise and to the point. It is easy to follow and logical. It cleary states the situation, problem, and solution. Problem Statement number 2 uses too many filler words and fluffy language. It is not as clear and easy to follow. There are too many transition words.
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